假如你是李华,你校为了增强学生体质,提升锻炼意识,将邀请歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操( )《本草纲目》(A ’s )的网络讲座,请你写封电子邮件给美国的交换生Betty,内容包括:
1、邀请她参加讲座。
2、告知讲座的时间及登录方式。
3、讲座内容。
注意:1、写作词数在80词左右;
2、可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Betty,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
1.Dear Betty,
I you to an one of the to be held next ,aimed at and .
at 9:30 a.m., the is about how to and dance to songs and to show their moves. The are set to A ’s from Jay Chou, a and . Liu will teach how to keep fit and a good as he did on .
to your !
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国的交换生Betty写封电子邮件,邀请他参加歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展的一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操( )《本草纲目》(A ’s )的网络讲座。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
健身:fitness→bodybuilding
增强:strengthen→build up
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I you to an one of the to be held next , aimed at ’ and .
拓展句:I you to an one of the to be held next , whose aim is to ’ and raise .
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I you to an one of the to be held next , aimed at ’ and . (运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Liu will teach how to keep fit and a good as he did on . (运用了as引导的方式状语从句)